im gonna be review ing this as i listen to the song lol so bear with me
0:00-0:08; great start. maybe lowering the pure note on what sounds like the synth could be nice
0:20- ; im really liking the buildup here! nice simple snare and concert bass drum beat
1:00; im telling you, those high strings are really doing wonders for this song
2:07; the chime part adds a nice soothing feel to it if you ask me
all in all, i gotta say this is a wonderful song. keep up the good work!!!